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  • isha

    March 31, 2023 at 8:44 PM

    Since the advent of information technology, it has changed all aspects of our lives. Although the disadvantages of such technology have become clear, I believe the advantages are non-trivial by a significant margin.

    There are numerous advantages of information technology, one of them is the outsourcing of repetitive work to it, making the whole pipeline of productivity a lot more efficient and therefore reducing human intervention. Computer technology has also brought a revolution to the way we communicate, making it almost instantaneous, helping to save time and increase value. Since its inception, it has created millions of jobs and helped build some of the largest companies from the ground up, in turn changing the fabric of our society.

    In any kind of technology emergence, there are also disadvantages, and information technology is no different. One of the most prominent is the increase in sedentary lifestyle, which can result in serious health implications like obesity, spinal injuries, and mental health issues which are not easily diagnosed. With the increased adoption of such technology, there is an increasing fear of job loss where people believe that their jobs might get replaced by computers that do the same work more efficiently. Apart from this, some fear disinformation, overwhelming information, and its effects on society increasing significantly.

    In conclusion, it’s clear that there are dis-proportionally more benefits of information technology as compared to its drawbacks, and if we work to solve the issues facing such technology, disadvantages can be reduced to a negligible extent.

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    -Grammatical errors.

    -There is repetition of words, like information,increase, and disadvantages.

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