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Deleted UserAugust 17, 2021 at 8:55 AMOPENING STATEMENT: Don’t write your name or address as that comes after signing off
BP1: of festival- of the festival
discounts- discount
Request you- I request you
And this- this is the explanation or effect of your previous statement so don’t start it with a new sentence
people travel- travel plans of people or people’s
BP 2: Would you kindly: I would request you to kindly consider
Make separate paragraphs on each prompt and add relevant details
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