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  • Anureet

    September 14, 2021 at 2:18 PM

    INTRODUCTION: paraphrase clearly without adding extra information

    impact in- impact on

    BP 1: believed- believe

    in Instagram- on Instagram- take care of proper nouns

    got happened- happened

    don’t quote personal examples

    BP 2: harmful to- harmful for

    at currently- currently

    the speedy- speedy

    the great- a great

    in live- on live

    impacts- impact

    the good- a good

    CONCLUSION: demerits impacts- rephrase

    BAND SCORE: 2.5/6 Keep Writing! Work on your grammar.

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