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Introduction- have been reducing- has reduced
Paraphrase the question statement without adding extra information and write a clear thesis statement incorporating the main points
BP1 : does not- do not
people have- person has
goes- go
body fit moreover- body fit. Moreover,
benifit- benefits
BP 2: wake early- wake up early
didn’t- don’t
every people- each person
Conclusion- with, The- with, the
the walking- walking
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