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  • Anureet

    September 29, 2021 at 8:50 AM
    140 Network Points
    Activity Points 15810

    Introduction- have been reducing- has reduced

    Paraphrase the question statement without adding extra information and write a clear thesis statement incorporating the main points

    BP1 : does not- do not

    people have- person has

    goes- go

    body fit moreover- body fit. Moreover,

    benifit- benefits

    BP 2: wake early- wake up early

    didn’t- don’t

    every people- each person

    Conclusion- with, The- with, the

    the walking- walking

    Band Score: 2.5/6 Keep Writing!

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