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* Some instances of unnecessary capitalization e.g. ‘Good advice’.
*’The two main advantages to live with parents’ – ‘advantages of living with..’ is better.
* “provides them opportunity to” (provides them the opportunity to)
*”help the children in household chores ” (‘help the children with’ would sound better here)
* “although living with parents have minor disadvantages” (‘living with parents has…’ since the subject is essentially ‘living’ and not ‘parents’. Look up ‘error of proximity)4/6.