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  • Shahbaz

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    October 27, 2021 at 12:22 PM
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    Activity Points 7690

    * ‘to be a part of’
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    Please look up sentences with ‘so that’ . Here, ‘leisure time so that, they can enhance their skills’ the comma after so that was not needed.
    * ‘make them to improve their creativity’ (‘make them improve’ [we don’t use ‘to’ with ‘make + + noun/pronoun + verb ] ‘help them improve’ would have been better here )
    * ‘children spending their time alone will become introvert’ (introverts)
    * ‘They tries to’ (They try to)

    This was one of your best essays in comparison. It had fewer errors and many well-written sentences. However, there are still quite a few noticeable errors.

    4.5/6

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