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  • Shahbaz

    November 4, 2021 at 11:41 PM

    Task Achievement : This essay addresses all parts of the task with relevant, well-developed points.

    Grammatical Range and Accuracy : A range of sentence types has been used naturally with no structural errors. ( or rather none that I could detect)

    Coherence and Cohesion : The essay is divided into paragraphs, each with a central idea. The sequencing of ideas is also easy for the reader to follow.

    Vocabulary: There is an impressive range.

    There are a few word choices (only a few) that I am not sure of. e.g. “lustre of teaching” I believe that you would normally end up using a sufficient range of words in your essay. I would not take any ‘risks’ with words that I am not sure of.


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