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  • Falak

    Administrator
    November 8, 2021 at 9:30 AM
    260 Network Points
    Activity Points 5850

    The advancements made in technology is (are)

    it will include isolation and becoming lethargic ( The sentences are incomplete; at times subjects are missing or at times collocation errors are there)

    When physical interactions doesn’t happen (don’t happen)

    pushing themselves to dangerous (sedentary) lifestyle

    Feedback: Examples are missing, avoid being repetitive with the vocabulary. Be careful with “Subject- verb” agreement. Need to work on sentence structure, in order to make complex sentences try not to loose the basic essence of the content.

    Band: 2/6

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