FalakAdministratorNovember 14, 2021 at 10:26 PM
Feedback : why I believe that being (studying) an art subject at school brings creativity to students but (and) is not a waste of time.
Need to work on sentence range, as monotonous structure has been observed here.
Try not to introduce a new angle in conclusion rather just sum up the ideas discussed in distinct paragraphs.
Band : 3/6