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  • Falak

    Administrator
    November 14, 2021 at 10:26 PM
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    Activity Points 6270

    Feedback : why I believe that being (studying) an art subject at school brings creativity to students but (and) is not a waste of time.

    Need to work on sentence range, as monotonous structure has been observed here.

    Try not to introduce a new angle in conclusion rather just sum up the ideas discussed in distinct paragraphs.

    Band : 3/6

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