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We are encouraged by advertisement..
We see so many advertisements…
One of my friends who works with…
He never wears most of them…
People why a lot of things which are cheap..
Actually do not have any requirement for the purchased product….
We see them everywhere like on TV…
Grammatical accuracy needs to be improved. You’re making errors in tenses and verb forms along with that subject verb agreement is also not good.
You can work with more good vocabulary as well as you need to include a few more different types of sentences to increase the range of your sentences.
Band Score: 3.0/6.0
