AdministratorNovember 16, 2021 at 8:58 PM720 Network PointsActivity Points 6040
Excellent piece of writing Mithusha
Good use of vocabulary and sufficient complexity in the sentences. Range is also excellent.
It provides the basic information that is needed…(You earlier mentioned Adverts -in plural….should have used ‘they’)…
Band Score: 5.0/6.0