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  • Shahbaz

    November 19, 2021 at 9:44 AM

    * ‘have the right for best medical facilities’ (Please check out some sentence examples with ‘have the right’ , usually it is used with ‘to’ and not ‘for’ –> ‘have the right to the best medical…’)

    * ‘there is need of good doctors’ ( ‘There is a need for good doctors’ [ ‘need of’ is not wrong. However, in this context, I think ‘need for’ works better)

    * ‘The graduates should not feel complete cutoff from’ (completely cut off)

    Here’s a sentence example ‘I’d just gotten off a ship, where I was completely cut off from all news.’

    * ‘and became a gangster, which completely ruined their family.’ (missing comma) [Please remember that although a comma was used here, they are not always used before ‘which’]

    Score : 5/6

    Clear and mostly error-free writing.

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