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some missing articles
* ‘with the increasing difficulty level of…’
* ‘positive development for the brighter future’
* ‘not just benefit teachers, but the nation’s …’* ‘has lead to an increase in’
* ‘are a positive development’
* ‘advanced concepts’ (not ‘advance concepts’)
* Please look up the definition and some sentence examples of ‘admittedly’ to make sure you are always using it in contexts that make sense. In this essay, it seems fine.
* ‘This might lead to their children struggling more’Score : 4.5/6