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that have (has) been recently opened
there are (is) a lot of loud noise
This is affecting total wellbeing of people living near me, it is affecting my sleep time, ( it is not only affecting my sleep time, but also affecting wellbeing of people living near me) – rearrangement of sentence is required here along with appropriate conjunction)
Can (could you please consider) you please sound proof the building – since it seems like you are suggesting solution, hence try to use modal verbs
Feedback : pay attention to subject-verb agreement and key points mentioned above . Keep writing!!
Band : 1.5/3