AdministratorNovember 29, 2021 at 3:41 PM
And number of workers employed at the beginning were (was) higher
quantity of metal (production) began from 4000 million tonnes
until August than (then) it goes (went/soared) up to almost 5000 million tonnes closer
, then dramatically decline (declined) in December .
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