Feedback : Work on sentence structure, include variety of sentences. Follow essay structure as discussed in class (B.P : Topic sentence, explanation , example) . Focus should not be presenting more points rather effective presentation of one or two points. Use cohesive devices to develop smooth transition among sentences.
Band: 2/6
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