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  • Falak

    December 10, 2021 at 3:21 PM

    I am not convinced with paraphrasing , it could be more effective

    Example in body paragraph 1, needs to be more relevant and well-represented

    Some research shows that students can focus more in academic classes if they are happy and relaxed (which can be attained by introducing art subjects in their regular curriculum)

    syllabus are( is) required

    necessary (mandatory) art classes provide a

    to choose their subjects. (as per their level of interest)

    Band: 3.5/6

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