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  • Falak

    December 14, 2021 at 11:22 AM

    students who were (are) appreciated

    it motivated (motivates) them

    moreover, teachers have the responsibility to explore the hidden talent of pupils ( found irrelevant or not have presently clearly in the context of topic sentence.

    The fear of getting punished would force them to be depressed and shy ( I believe the context is not accurate as per the argument)

    he feel (feels) more stressed.

    Not convinced with the conclusion (incomplete usage of “though”)

    Feedback : Use tense carefully . Subject-verb agreement is another factor that requires precision. Use essay structure as discussed in class.

    Band: 3/6

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