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Feedback : Somehow, second body paragraph seems off track as topic sentence is misleading (talks about importance of competition; this could be an explanation). Make use of transitional words foe better clarity and understanding.
Band: 3.5/6
Feedback : Somehow, second body paragraph seems off track as topic sentence is misleading (talks about importance of competition; this could be an explanation). Make use of transitional words foe better clarity and understanding.
Band: 3.5/6
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