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  • Falak

    Administrator
    December 19, 2021 at 12:50 PM

    Feedback : Somehow, second body paragraph seems off track as topic sentence is misleading (talks about importance of competition; this could be an explanation). Make use of transitional words foe better clarity and understanding.

    Band: 3.5/6

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