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Giving good education is a dream of every parent to their children (giving good education to their children is a dream of every parent)
There are several of (There are other several) advantages and dis advantages (of this notion , which this essay will be discussing in the upcoming paragraphs) of this which i will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
When children goes (go) – children is plural
, children gets (get)
them self (themselves)
they avoid doing unnecessary expensive.(expenditure)
there (their) own business
Moreover its very expensive and its not (affordable for all parents) able for all parents to afford.
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