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  • Falak

    December 29, 2021 at 12:38 PM

    In this essay we will compare the for the years 1995 to 2011- Task-1 is not an essay

    (Overall,) The biggest percentage of money spent on food is evident from the entire data. Medicine, on the other hand, receives a smaller share of the budget.- Overall is important to mention in the overview

    Clothing and on the other hand (on the other hand, clothing)

    had a percentage of 1995, with 19% and 18%, respectively in 2011 so they was not a huge change. (had percentage of 19% and 18% in 1995 and 2011 respectively).

    so they was not a huge change. (it experienced a marginal change)

    spending on it by (from) 9% in 1995 to 2% in 2021.

    Feedback : Follow the Task-1 structure , as discussed in class. Sentence structure needs to be improved. Make use of cohesive devices and prepositions should be use carefully.

    Band: 1.5/3

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