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Second paragraph could have more loud and clear topic sentence and the statement you opened with can be an explanation, will make it more cohesive.
Keep writing!!
band: 4/6
Second paragraph could have more loud and clear topic sentence and the statement you opened with can be an explanation, will make it more cohesive.
Keep writing!!
band: 4/6
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