AdministratorJanuary 28, 2022 at 8:22 AM
then (than) the household goods which holds some percentage
Overall, Food and clothing remained the largest categories in both years, and medicine and household goods remaining the smallest. Admittedly, there were noticeable changes in all four categories over the years. (recommended overall , talking about the trends , not data)
Although, medicine became priority of people in 16 years after 1995, with a major increase of 7% from 4% in 2011
Although, medicine became priority of people in 16 years after 1995, ( medicine still hold small percentage of 11% in 2011, so clearly it wasn’t the priority)
one of the most essential budgets in china.(China) – proper noun
conclusion is not required in Task-1.