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  • Falak

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    January 30, 2022 at 10:28 PM
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    Thesis statement and topic sentence of body paragraph 1 , refers how new skill at an early age can be more adaptive, I would advise to mention how money management skill at an early life can be advantageous.

    essay could be more coherent as at few places , I found the sentences were only adding the verbosity and were repetitive. Explanation should be effective not just paraphrasing of reason sentence.

    Band: 2.5/6

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