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In introduction, outline and thesis statement is missing)
In the contrary, (on the contrary)
customers (are) also supporting the product
directly affect to the company who (which) is manufacturing the same product
to increase their sell, (sale)
eventually to reduce their losses or to increase their sell, they will plan accordingly by providing less packaging on product ( more explanation could be added here to enhance the cohesion)
if every individual take responsibility to banned (ban) over packed product
Band: 3/6
