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  • Falak

    Administrator
    February 7, 2022 at 8:35 AM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 27170

    In introduction, outline and thesis statement is missing)

    In the contrary, (on the contrary)

    customers (are) also supporting the product

    directly affect to the company who (which) is manufacturing the same product

    to increase their sell, (sale)

    eventually to reduce their losses or to increase their sell, they will plan accordingly by providing less packaging on product ( more explanation could be added here to enhance the cohesion)

    if every individual take responsibility to banned (ban) over packed product

    Band: 3/6

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