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It is believed that product manufacturers and the resellers are obliged to reduce the amount of packaging of goods, (while others believe) the responsibility also lies on the consumers to avoid purchasing items with less covering.
The raise in technology has led to new industries in the consumer space (The raise in technology has led new industries in the consumer space)
B.P 1, seems to highlight the benefits of packaging
B.P 2, could be elaborated with more explanation
conclusion is not the place for explanation , try to keep it assertive and concise.
Band : 2.5/6