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  • Falak

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    February 9, 2022 at 8:31 AM
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    Secondly (,) I like to inform you,

    I could observe the use of multiple short sentences, basically simple sentence structure has been used. Need to work on compound and complex sentences.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 2/3

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