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In Introduction, paraphrasing is mentioning about two views, which is certainly not the question
belive (believe)
Voluteerism (volunteerism)
Increasing value of knowledge is part of school (Knowledge enhancement is one the important aspects of schooling)
It must be based for (to) improve student’s base
it’s help to student ( It helps students)
interships (Internships)
as a consequences (consequence)
Volunteerism is effect on students (can effect their behaviour)
Circulum (curriculum)
Feedback : Need to work on basic sentence structure and spellings are also one of the major concerns. At times, answer went off the track too.
Band: 2/6
