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  • Falak

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    February 17, 2022 at 11:29 PM
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    The pie charts shows the data of China which shows ( sentence structure needs to be improved here)

    Overall, it seems that food is the basic need of the people which is highest among all the essentials (in both the years)

    The expenditure on food display (displays) highest in the year 1995 (however, I would suggest to write in -past tense)

    which later fall (falls) to 59% in 2011.

    spending on clothings remain (remains)

    Two feature paragraphs are required as per the structure discussed in the class, hence comparison and grouping of data has been found limited.

    Band: 1.5/3

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