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groups (Groups)
, i (I) will describe (discuss merits and demerits) a number of my views
one (One) of the many Advantages (advantages)
sporting (supporting)
Often, people do not feel interested in looking at clothes like theirs, so they do not interfere with their work (sentence seems to contradict the context, just because of grammatical error , it is questioning the cohesion)
trying to avoid being (wearing) uniform.
arguments stated in body paragraphs have not been developed fully. Sentences are incomplete and certainly disturbing the overall progression throughout. Sentence structure, lexical resources and grammar accuracy should be considered.
Band: 2.5/6
