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  • Falak

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    February 25, 2022 at 7:45 AM
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    as it will be an exploitation of natural vitamins as well as for (its) health concerns. (are still unknown)

    It will be hard for people to found (find) out easily. (this sentence is not justifying the context, lacks cohesion)

    it was bio product (of) two hybrid coconut, (coconuts)

    I believe people should protect the natural products therefore (faulty use of cohesive device) it will safeguard our health in future.

    bio-diversity. (since this point has been mentioned in conclusion, I would suggest to elaborate this in one of the body paragraphs too)

    Band: 3.5/6

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