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that is people face in there (their) day to day life in cities is traffic congestion. (faulty sentence structure)
no proper infrastructure, (improper infrastructure)
with out (without)
Furthermore, improper functioning of traffic signals and absence of traffic police. (is another cause of traffic jams)
For instance, an article published in a popular newspaper they(not required) quoted malfunctioning of traffic lights was primary reason. behind this congestion issue)
Proper education (regarding traffic rules) should be provided to citizens before hitting the roads.
government implement(s)
bookcases (book cases)
sentences are incomplete or partially developed reasons, sentence structure should be improved.
Band: 2.5/6
