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taking various kind(s)
we are witnessing more number of vehicle(s)
For instance (,) Delhi transportation
no other vehicle(s) are allowed to drive on the (same) lane
It (has) decreased time of travelling as (hence,) it encouraged people to travel in public transportation (more often) and it decreased 25% traffic of the city by following such unique solution.
Solution could be more effective, as it is just mentioning the solutions (not exactly what all is present in introduction)
Be careful with punctuation marks. At times, monotonous sentence structure has been observed, work on range.
Band: 3/6
keep writing!!
