AdministratorMarch 1, 2022 at 11:46 PM660 Network PointsActivity Points 26550
the vital solutions to overcome the problems like building better roadways, flyovers and also encourage citizens to use public transport. ( the vital solutions like building better roadways, flyovers and also encourage citizens to use public transport. to overcome the (this) problem)
As population is increasing day by day, so (there is more) more demand for automobiles and more private vehicles on roads.
, in bus depot of Azadpur (,) an urban area in Delhi
there is (are) no well organised roads
karala, (Karala)- proper noun
the situation becomes worsening.( even more worse)
over use of “so” is making all the sentences monotonous. Try to use other cohesive devices or conjunctions as well. Do make use of punctuation marks. Lexical resources can be improved