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  • Falak

    March 1, 2022 at 11:57 PM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 26560

    Introduction is incomplete, not stating the solutions.

    if everyone in the family uses their private transport to commute (,) (it will result in road jam) as a result it enlarges the road jam.

    B.P 1, is mentioning solutions, stick to pattern as discussed in class . Single idea per paragraph

    If over bridge (is) available

    More bicycles path can help to less logjam although (moreover,) it is reduces the air pollution as well. –

    no other vehicle are (is) allowed on that lane

    conclusion is again focusing the solution, “causes” part has not been discussed. Hence, not summarizing the paragraph completely

    Band: 3/6

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