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  • Falak

    March 1, 2022 at 11:57 PM

    Introduction is incomplete, not stating the solutions.

    if everyone in the family uses their private transport to commute (,) (it will result in road jam) as a result it enlarges the road jam.

    B.P 1, is mentioning solutions, stick to pattern as discussed in class . Single idea per paragraph

    If over bridge (is) available

    More bicycles path can help to less logjam although (moreover,) it is reduces the air pollution as well. –

    no other vehicle are (is) allowed on that lane

    conclusion is again focusing the solution, “causes” part has not been discussed. Hence, not summarizing the paragraph completely

    Band: 3/6

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