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Most people agree that pursing at (not required) university or college is a best path to progress their carrier, (career)
I strongly advocate education from university can lead to (better) career prospects.
as the world is modernising and (technology is bringing rapid changes) rapid change in technology.
make use of cohesive devices to increase the readability.
So, education play(s) a crucial role in one’s life.
Develop the second view equally as the view one, before stating your own opinion (question demands)
Band: 3/6