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which i brought two month ago [which I had purchased]
[I had ordered it online]
[use capital I while representing the answer]
But after two months its mike (mic)/ [the sound system started troubleshooting/functional disruption/]
.However nobody has send till date [nobody has been sent for any repair or customer support]
Therefore to resolve the issue i would appreciate if you replace (this) with the new laptop (or else I have to take..)
[yours faithfully,] add full name
work on well explained sentence range and synonyms.
The question is about the item received is broken , not about “after sales service”, that’s the reason content of the answer is not appropriate
work on the errors!!