NIL Community

Find answers, ask questions, and connect with our
community around the world.

  • Falak

    March 22, 2022 at 5:21 PM

    Repetition of words. Sentence structure needs to be improved , try to use variety of structures.

    Conclusion should not talk about the new angle ( that has not discussed in body paragraphs)

    No example found .

    Lack of cohesive devices

    Lack of lexical Resources

    Total words :261

    Band: 3/6

Step 1 of 2

You’ve made it.

You have reached the best place for your IELTS and English preparation. Please tell us what you’re looking for so that we can help you better.