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I am ohmkar (Ohmkar)
cyclone nilofer (Nilofer)
but now if we see our surroundings it was (is) horrible .
when you will be (will) sought out problem – future indefinite tense
drainage near to my premises and (as) we are experiencing bad smell is coming out of it.
as they were (are) experienced,
Yours faithfully, (sincerely)
Keep writing!!
Band:2/3