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more and more office(s) are
l definetely (definitely) have a brightp (bright) future
I will elaborate on (avoid on) my views
there are more and more office are adopting an open-space design for employees. While it is not accepted by all the companies currently (avoid period here, and make it as a single complex sentence using while)
an opening (open) design for the working environment
people who are working in an open place it (is) easier
will evntually (eventually) bring
working in an open-space environment bring(s)
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