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  • Falak

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    March 29, 2022 at 1:41 PM
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    that i (I) took a month ago

    As (Even though) the course was for a month (,) but (avoid “but” here) i felt time had passed very qucikly (quickly) as i enjoyed the course so much

    baking cakes and decorating it (them)

    , i used this (these) skills to prepare cakes

    dear one(s)

    (Infact/ even) Everyone has even (” even” is not suitable here) praised me after enjoying the cake

    yours (your) respected institute.

    proceduces (procedures)

    Take the points/ suggestions mentioned above. Proof -read is must to avoid silly errors.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 1.5/3

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