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that i (I) took a month ago
As (Even though) the course was for a month (,) but (avoid “but” here) i felt time had passed very qucikly (quickly) as i enjoyed the course so much
baking cakes and decorating it (them)
, i used this (these) skills to prepare cakes
dear one(s)
(Infact/ even) Everyone has even (” even” is not suitable here) praised me after enjoying the cake
yours (your) respected institute.
proceduces (procedures)
Take the points/ suggestions mentioned above. Proof -read is must to avoid silly errors.
Keep writing!!
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