AdministratorMarch 29, 2022 at 7:49 PM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31540
mentioned graph illustrate(s) the goods
they have some fluctuation(s) between different
reflects a modest increases (increase)
quantity of goods (transported) stated 40 millions
Try to maintain the tense throughout (I would suggest past tense in this graph )
Make use of varied cohesive devices and sentence structures.