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  • Falak

    Administrator
    March 30, 2022 at 8:44 AM
    720 Network Points
    Activity Points 31710

    word count is 175 words, certainly the response in under length

    Many individual(s) believe

    topic sentence of B.P 1, is way too general , could be more coherent

    should be consists (consist)

    , many parents and family members do not believe in such way (It is an opinion based essay , don’t respond it as “discuss both the views”, rather than saying “while parents argue…” , you need to present it as your own idea.

    limited use of sentence structure , try to expand body paragraphs with extended ideas.

    Band: 2.5/6

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