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  • Falak

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    April 4, 2022 at 8:21 AM
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    introducing it in students (‘) early career

    only on (those) products which are essential,

    so he invests money on (in) stock market

    now it is (his) passive (additional- as “passive” has already been used) source of income.

    effort to make lengthier sentences has been clearly observed. there is clear overall progression. Well established cohesion . But still expecting improvement in sentence range variation and lexical resources.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 3.5/6 .

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