word count is 136 words, certainly the response is under length
unit of measurement is missing
two feature paragraphs are required.
“Overall” is advised to mention in overview.
lack of grouping and comparison of data.
Make use of cohesive devices in order to maintain cohesion throughout.
Band: 1/3
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