AdministratorApril 5, 2022 at 10:12 AM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31710
word count is 169 , task 2 must have 250 words at least. Certainly response in under length
I strong (strongly) believe
and concern (concerned) towards
Feedback: Well approach, good use of cohesive devices, Content is acceptable but candidate needs to work on repetition as found more than two Concern, Less content was found, needs to work on thought process and few more related words. Inappropriate verb and adjective found that caused the sentence formation errors highlighted above.