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  • Falak

    Administrator
    April 5, 2022 at 10:33 AM
    720 Network Points
    Activity Points 31700

    “I” needs to be capital throughout

    “duty” , “individuals” – repeatedly used

    there are many reason(s)

    there are many reason why some individulas (individuals) say that it is the duty of of the goverment (government) – avoid copying language from the question

    the governments should enacts (enact)

    factories sometimes dump (release) dirty water,

    common water source(s)

    contribution to protect there (their) surroundings and neighbourhood.

    h individual may have a (an) important

    if (only) the government

    feedback : Make use of cohesive devices, sentence structure needs to be improved. Grammatical errors are there. Punctuation is important.

    Band: 2.5/6

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