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.In addition (to it), people from
respected universities as (and) they get to know about each other cultures,
Moreover(,) some universities
Moreover some universities call their alumni to share their experience about their study life so the upcoming future graduates will get some ideas. (too general statement, try to establish cohesion by mentioning ideas on pros of foreign education)
Feedback : Sentence structure needs to be improved. No example found, explanations could be better. Word count is 216 , the response in under length, thus limited use of grammar and explanation has been observed.
Band: 2.5/6
