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would like (to) get the chance to make in the practice
which is one the reason (reasons) for (my) capability to doing this work.
As of now(,) due to summer vacation
third bullet point is about what you would like to do in free time, I advise to mention that as well, hence the last one is not developed completely.
Your’s (Yours) faithfully
Proof- reading is must to avoid grammatical slips.
Keep writing!!
Band: 1.5/3
