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people were wary (worry) about purchasing
. However, I would like you to add information in local language also for their better understanding not only, but also mention items were not touched by hands while packing and delivered safely with all Covid protocols- not only , but also has not been used effectively , (it could be ” not only for information, but also the prices offered)
It is advised to develop bullet point what ” business ” you are into, I felt that has not been mentioned distinctively leads to lack of cohesion in first paragraph.
Write 4 paragraphs as discussed structure.
